The Best College Essays Start with Better Questions

Every year, students sit down to write their college essays and ask themselves the same question: What’s the most impressive thing I’ve done that I can tell colleges about?

It's an understandable place to start. But it's rarely the question that leads to the strongest essays.

A Different Question Changes Everything

One student we'll call Ethan came to his essay meeting convinced he'd already found the perfect topic. As captain of the debate team, he'd won tournaments, mentored younger students, and developed into a confident leader. On paper, it seemed like an obvious choice.

As Ethan described his idea, however, something was missing. His story explained what he'd done, but it didn't explain who he was. So his counselor asked him to set debate aside for a moment.

"Tell me about an experience that has stayed with you."

"It has nothing to do with debate," he admitted.

He began talking about teaching his younger sister to ride a bicycle. Every time he let go of the seat, she stopped pedaling because she was afraid she'd fall. Eventually, he realized the only way she would gain confidence was if he stopped holding on. When she reached the end of the street and realized she was riding on her own, she turned around with a smile he never forgot.

As they talked, Ethan made a connection he hadn't seen before. The same satisfaction he felt watching his sister gain confidence was what drew him to mentoring younger debaters. His favorite moments had never been winning competitions. They had been helping someone else believe they could succeed.

Suddenly, the essay wasn't really about a bicycle. It was about the kind of person Ethan had become.

The bicycle story never appeared anywhere else in his application, yet it helped explain everything else. It gave context to his leadership, his activities, and even his future goals in a way a list of accomplishments never could.

Given the enormous number of students who apply to college each year, the odds are that there are other applicants whose experiences and accomplishments are similar to yours. If you focus your essay on what you’ve done, you’ll often end up mirroring other students (and echoing your Activity List).

However, if you focus on who you are, you can capture your individuality in a way that is novel and refreshing, even for the most veteran college essay readers. Essay coaches, college counselors, and—most importantly—admissions officers are always looking for these essays: the personal statements that convey a student’s unique essence. These essays are not only original, but they also create an immediate human connection that will have admissions readers rooting for your application.

How to Choose a College Essay Topic: Ask Better Questions

Ethan's experience illustrates something experienced college counselors see every year: students often believe they need to find the most impressive story. In reality, the strongest essays usually begin with a better question.

When you're brainstorming a college essay, instead of asking "What should I write about?", ask yourself:

• What experience has stayed with me, and why?
• When did I see myself differently?
• What ordinary moment taught me something unexpected?

Questions like these move beyond accomplishments and uncover the experiences that reveal how you think, what you value, and how you've grown.

The Story Is Already There

The answer may not seem important at first. In fact, it may feel too ordinary to belong in a college essay. But ordinary moments often reveal extraordinary insight. The strongest college essays don't begin with the perfect topic. They begin with a better question.

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